Anyone out there remember their Old English rules better than I do?
I'm trying to make the smallest of adjustments to Caedmon's Hymn for part of the ocean in diluvium.
It currently reads:
Nu sculon herigean heofonrices Weard,
ece Drihten, or onstealde,
heofon to hrofe, [eth]a middangeard,
abieteende
Which in contemporary English would go something like
Now we must praise heaven-kingdom's Guard,
eternal Lord, the beginning established,
heaven as roof, then middle-earth,
breaking [with implication of storms]
I'm also thinking about replacing "or onstealde" with the bit from the line below, "He aerst sceop" (He first made), which is a bit better sensewise even as it discards the alliteration.
I got Cs and Bs in my OE and Beowulf courses due to trying to create good poetry instead of laser-accurate translations, but I don't want to totally botch this one. Any help is appreciated.
RJ Gibson | white noise :: something
8 hours ago
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piecemeal poet piecemeal frequency
have a nice day
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